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Shots fired....

Postby bry_man » Fri Mar 10, 2017 5:47 am

Another example of my daughters powers, also I have changed the "outro" to a more dramatic ending and matches the beginning...

you will need sound for this video, not sure if people have it turned off or not

hope you like :tup:

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Re: Shots fired....

Postby Dave McElderry » Fri Mar 10, 2017 7:00 am

Cute!
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Re: Shots fired....

Postby Steve Grisetti » Fri Mar 10, 2017 8:12 am

HA!
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Re: Shots fired....

Postby MrGrunthunter » Fri Mar 10, 2017 8:32 am

Very creative and well done. :-)
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Re: Shots fired....

Postby Peru » Fri Mar 10, 2017 10:09 am

Nice work. :-5

And now a word from the Grammar Police:
Image Image

You may want to make some changes:
-Change Dont to Don't
-Change Thankyou to Thank you

Poetic license will excuse the lack of periods.
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Re: Shots fired....

Postby TreeTopsRanch » Fri Mar 10, 2017 11:24 am

Good one!
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Re: Shots fired....

Postby Chuck Engels » Fri Mar 10, 2017 1:28 pm

Very cute, love the smoke ! !

I agree with Peru Bob, need to change some of the text.

I still think you should end with "Bry Tube" as well.
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Re: Shots fired....

Postby bry_man » Fri Mar 10, 2017 1:52 pm

Peru wrote:You may want to make some changes:
-Change Dont to Don't
-Change Thankyou to Thank you


ok I've edited it so it'll be ready for my next video
thank you :tup:
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Re: Shots fired....

Postby bry_man » Fri Mar 10, 2017 1:53 pm

Chuck Engels wrote:I still think you should end with "Bry Tube" as well.


do you mean it should say Bry Tube again at the end?
would that be before or after the thank you bits?
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Re: Shots fired....

Postby Peru » Fri Mar 10, 2017 8:24 pm

bry_man wrote:
ok I've edited it so it'll be ready for my next video
thank you :tup:


You're welcome. :)
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Re: Shots fired....

Postby Chuck Engels » Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:13 am

bry_man wrote:do you mean it should say Bry Tube again at the end?
would that be before or after the thank you bits?


Again at the very end. Worth a try.
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