Bee Swarm Paintbrush - Muvipix Cut

[theOZer]

Muvipix.com fellow amateur movie makers helped me tweak my vid "Bee Swarm Paintbrush with Mike" into this tighter clip. I edited out 4 minutes, changed the music score, .5X sped up what didn't end up on the cutting room floor. _Paz_ gets a tip of the hat from me for her detailed critique and including links to related Muvipix Community vidz.
Love Bees, theOZer
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Length: 00:02:36 Size: 278 MB Format: AVCHD
Date filmed: May 6, 2015 1:00 - 3:30 PM MDT Date published: May 22, 2015
Camera: Sony HDR-CX240 Handycam, Sony HDR-PJ440 Handycam, Ravelli AVT Pro Tripod
Video Editors used: Sony Movie Studio Platinum 13, PlayMemories Home
Video FX: NewBlue MSPPS Color Fixer Plus - OpenFX Transitions: none
Music: Sony ACID Music Studio > Dance music > Mark Siegenthaler: Flipped, Driver (excerpt).
Location: Pikes Peak Region, Colorado, USA
[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hta9OOq2DE0[/youtube]

[sidd finch]

Good job. I liked the backwards effect. Good job.

I think keeping videos under 3 minutes allows more people to watch them and garner more interest. The only 6-7 minute moves I find compelling are the highly produced mini documentaries. They are edited so well with music dialog and a variety of breathtaking shots that you loose track that it was six minutes.

My only 2 cents to add would be to keep a smaller size font and fade the font out so it is not abrupt.... but like I said very very small critique.

Sidd