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Re: Logo and Business Card comments

Postby Jayell » Sat Aug 09, 2008 10:32 am

Now it'll get lost in the stack with everyone else's :( I seem to be in the minority, but since since you're asking for comments .. part of what you're advertising, Jamal, is creativity. The first card demonstrated that.
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Re: Logo and Business Card comments

Postby ridon127 » Sat Aug 09, 2008 2:30 pm

I liked the first one myself but the white is nice.. To me, everyone has white and I would want something that is not the norm..IMO
Good job on both :-D
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Re: Logo and Business Card comments

Postby Clayton » Sat Aug 09, 2008 3:21 pm

I lean a little bit toward the first one. [-(
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Re: Logo and Business Card comments

Postby Wheat King » Sun Aug 10, 2008 2:13 pm

Chuck Engels wrote:Much more professional looking Jamal, looks great this way !!
But is that the look you are going for, professional?


Good point! No definitely don't want to portray professional... My target customer is people I know or meet (other parents, neighbours etc. ) I definitely want to portray affordability .

I've decided to go with the attached. I took out the Lion King sun thing and the inner shadows, moved the text and cameras to tighten up their placement and added a drop shadow to the logo to pop it off the background a bit.

I'm glad I went through this exercise! Now to get working on the website and demo reel!

Thank you very much for the comments everyone!
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Re: Logo and Business Card comments

Postby Clayton » Sun Aug 10, 2008 2:21 pm

Very nice! :-5
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Re: Logo and Business Card comments

Postby Bob D » Sun Aug 10, 2008 3:58 pm

I think it looks great Jamal. Just note though that color is spelled incorrectly. img0350 jk!
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Re: Logo and Business Card comments

Postby Paul LS » Sun Aug 10, 2008 4:09 pm

:lol: Colour looks correct to me Bob... :-D
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Re: Logo and Business Card comments

Postby Maxine370 » Sun Aug 10, 2008 4:32 pm

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Re: Logo and Business Card comments

Postby Chuck Engels » Sun Aug 10, 2008 8:40 pm

I'm reserving my opinion till hear what Jayell has to say :)
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Re: Logo and Business Card comments

Postby Wheat King » Sun Aug 10, 2008 9:05 pm

Yes Jayell, very good point about advertising creativity. :mrgreen:
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Re: Logo and Business Card comments

Postby jackfalbey » Sun Aug 10, 2008 10:16 pm

Bob D wrote:I think it looks great Jamal. Just note though that color is spelled incorrectly.

Paul LS wrote:Colour looks correct to me Bob...

I've often said that the biggest problem with the British (and Canadians) is that they don't know how to speak English! :-8 :razz: :lol: :lol:

Seriously though, the card and logo look great Jamal. Good luck with the business venture; who knows, maybe you'll be calling yourself a professional sooner than you think. Maybe even quit the day job... \:D/
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Re: Logo and Business Card comments

Postby ridon127 » Sun Aug 10, 2008 10:20 pm

I don't see the word color on the card.... Is it a view of the front and back? :shock: I can only see the front.. #-o

Anyway, it looks great.. You are sooooooooo talented..
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Re: Logo and Business Card comments

Postby Wheat King » Sun Aug 10, 2008 10:28 pm

jackfalbey wrote:Seriously though, the card and logo look great Jamal. Good luck with the business venture; who knows, maybe you'll be calling yourself a professional sooner than you think. Maybe even quit the day job... \:D/


Thanks for the compliments Jack! re quitting day job...Who knows? I never say never. 8-[ If I hated my job it might happen faster but fortunately I have to say I love my job (most days) :lol:
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Re: Logo and Business Card comments

Postby Wheat King » Sun Aug 10, 2008 10:30 pm

ridon127 wrote:I don't see the word color on the card.... Is it a view of the front and back? :shock: I can only see the front.. #-o

Anyway, it looks great.. You are sooooooooo talented..
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Thanks Donna for the compliment. On the back of the first couple of versions I used the word colour.
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Re: Logo and Business Card comments

Postby Jayell » Sun Aug 10, 2008 10:56 pm

Chuck Engels wrote:I'm reserving my opinion till hear what Jayell has to say :)

I've been sitting here looking at them side-by-side .. I really like the colors and effects on the first one. But if you're trying to compromise between flashy and traditional, this last one accomplishes that. Which one do YOU like, Jamal? And what is it you want your card to say?
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