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by Steve Grisetti » Thu Jul 19, 2018 6:54 am
As many of you know, I work a weekend job as a food tourguide here in MIlwaukee, taking people into the neighborhoods or on a bus around town, teaching history about the area and introducing them to some of the city's best food. Here's a draft of a mini-doc I'm making about one of our tours. http://vimeo.com/279091597
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by Peru » Thu Jul 19, 2018 9:04 am
Looking good. I'm assuming that you will add some stabilization to some of the shots.
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by sidd finch » Thu Jul 19, 2018 9:41 am
I like it well done. was really nicely paced. I also noticed how natural the interviews were no one looked like a deer in headlights.
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by Dave McElderry » Thu Jul 19, 2018 10:15 am
That's going to be nice! But I was expecting some Grisetti narration...
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by TreeTopsRanch » Thu Jul 19, 2018 11:24 am
I agree. Needs Grisetti narration please.
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by Chuck Engels » Thu Jul 19, 2018 1:24 pm
Ron, can you figure out why the Vimeo tag isn't working anymore??????
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by Chuck Engels » Thu Jul 19, 2018 1:25 pm
Are you working on a commercial for the tour group Steve, awesome stuff you have there I know my sister loved going on the tour with you
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by sidd finch » Thu Jul 19, 2018 3:39 pm
The voice..... YES That voice... Sidd
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by momoffduty » Thu Jul 19, 2018 6:26 pm
Good stuff Steve. The opening reminds me of sitcom that is no longer on air. Can't remember the name of the show. Meant as a compliment. I liked how you were right in with the people interviewed. Felt like you were part of the friends circle.
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by Steve Grisetti » Thu Jul 19, 2018 8:59 pm
Thanks, guys. Ultimately this will be one of a series of YouTube promos for our tours. The company owner's vision for this is a bit different than mine, so the final piece will be a bit different than this. But I did want to share my original draft with my peers.
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by sidd finch » Fri Jul 20, 2018 11:02 am
It would be interesting to see the difference between yours and the final version.
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by Chuck Engels » Fri Jul 20, 2018 12:32 pm
sidd finch wrote:It would be interesting to see the difference between yours and the final version.
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I agree, would like to see both versions
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by sidd finch » Sun Jul 22, 2018 12:28 pm
Hummm they like you voice for the tour bus but not the video.......(head scratcher) Sidd
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by Steve Grisetti » Sun Jul 22, 2018 1:06 pm
I wanted the tourguide and guests to speak for themselves, Sidd.
Right now I'm culling video for one of the tours I lead, in which case I'll be one of the people speaking on camera.
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by Ron » Sun Jul 22, 2018 2:40 pm
Chuck Engels wrote:Ron, can you figure out why the Vimeo tag isn't working anymore??????
Fixed
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