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by bry_man » Fri Mar 10, 2017 5:47 am
Another example of my daughters powers, also I have changed the "outro" to a more dramatic ending and matches the beginning... you will need sound for this video, not sure if people have it turned off or not hope you like
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by Dave McElderry » Fri Mar 10, 2017 7:00 am
Cute! ![](https://s3.amazonaws.com/tapatalk-emoji/emoji106.png)
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by Steve Grisetti » Fri Mar 10, 2017 8:12 am
HA!
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by MrGrunthunter » Fri Mar 10, 2017 8:32 am
Very creative and well done. ![smiley :-)](./images/smilies/regular_smile.gif)
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by Peru » Fri Mar 10, 2017 10:09 am
Nice work. And now a word from the Grammar Police: ![Image](https://s22.postimg.org/ulkrmserl/IMG_1399_e1440438276607.jpg) You may want to make some changes: -Change Dont to Don't -Change Thankyou to Thank you Poetic license will excuse the lack of periods.
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by TreeTopsRanch » Fri Mar 10, 2017 11:24 am
Good one!
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by Chuck Engels » Fri Mar 10, 2017 1:28 pm
Very cute, love the smoke ! !
I agree with Peru Bob, need to change some of the text.
I still think you should end with "Bry Tube" as well.
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by bry_man » Fri Mar 10, 2017 1:52 pm
Peru wrote:You may want to make some changes: -Change Dont to Don't -Change Thankyou to Thank you
ok I've edited it so it'll be ready for my next video thank you ![Good! :tup:](./images/smilies/good.gif)
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by bry_man » Fri Mar 10, 2017 1:53 pm
Chuck Engels wrote:I still think you should end with "Bry Tube" as well.
do you mean it should say Bry Tube again at the end? would that be before or after the thank you bits?
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by Peru » Fri Mar 10, 2017 8:24 pm
bry_man wrote:ok I've edited it so it'll be ready for my next video thank you ![Good! :tup:](./images/smilies/good.gif)
You're welcome. ![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_smile.gif)
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by Chuck Engels » Tue Mar 14, 2017 8:13 am
bry_man wrote:do you mean it should say Bry Tube again at the end? would that be before or after the thank you bits?
Again at the very end. Worth a try.
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